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GermanyXReader Define 'Proper' Ch. 3 by josie1130 GermanyXReader Define 'Proper' Ch. 3 by josie1130

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EDIT: Yeah so I read some of the comments about how the reader took it too far before with Lilith, and I re-read it again, and I was like, "omd you gaiys are right" So I changed the ending and I like it SOOOOOOOSOSOSOSOSO much better. So re-read the new ending and enjoy~

..................OMD..........(Oh my Deity)

DAFUQ IS THIS SO LONG OMG!!!!!!!?

These things are getting progressively longer as I type them! But I think this one has a good excuse since it took me

3 WEEKS TO GET OUT.......i think.....it feels that way, at least..... :iconimsorryplz:

But anywho, yeah, you're not really in this one a whole lot, because you're asleep, so you can't do much XD

So Lilith is the semi-star today! (Don't worry it all goes back to you and Luddy next chapter~....maybe o.O)

Anywho, please tell me what you think! I'm sosososososososososoooooo sorry this took me so long T^T

Enjoy~

Chapter 1:[link]
Chapter 2:[link]
Chapter 3: YOU ARE HERE
Chapter 4:[link]

TRANSLATIONS:

Frau: Woman
Der einzige: The one and only
mädchen: Girl
Vater: Father
mädel: Girl, woman
frauen: girls
dumkomph: Literally it's dumb head, but it means idiot or stupid
Und: and
arse: butt (ass ^.^)
enkelin: granddaughter

“Hey, Vati! Ich bin nach oben gehen, um zu sehen, wenn Ludwig braucht Hilfe. Warum nimmst du nicht das Mädchen Großvater irgendwo zu sitzen?”:
"Hey, Dad! I'm going upstairs to see if Ludwig needs help. Why don't you find somewhere for the girl's grandfather to sit down?"

“Sehr gut. Gehe helfen Ludwig. Ich bin sicher, er wird nicht wissen, wie man richtig damit umzugehen, sowieso. Komm runter, wenn du mich brauchst. Ich werde sehen, ob ich beruhigen kann Gerald unten genug, um nach oben zu kommen.”:
"Very well. Go help Ludwig. I'm sure he won't know how to properly deal with this anyway. Come down if you need me. I'll see if I can calm Gerald down enough to come up. "

I don’t care what it is if_______isharmedinanywayIdon’tknowwhatIwilldoohGodpleaseletherbeokayohdearLordletherbeok:
I don’t care what it is if_______is harmed in any way I don’t know what I will do oh God please let her be okay oh dear Lord let her be ok

Verdammit: Dammit
Herrin: Mistress
bruder: brother
Ja: yeah, yes
Gott: God
Großvater: grandfather
mienself: myself
es tut mir leid: I'm sorry


Germany belongs to: :iconhimaruyaplz:

Story Belongs to: :iconjosie1130: Moi~
You currently belong to yourself~
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Lili39 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
The awesomnes ..........
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gah i wanna cry i've made you all wait like a year for the next chapter
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:iconlili39:
Lili39 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
It's alright dont cry !!! We can wait you should only cry if you have stop the story when it's on cliffhanger !
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
XD great flashback. Oh ludwig, ever the practical one. XD
and, great story. :) but porr grandpa
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:iconjosie1130:
josie1130 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know! I hope grandpa will be ok! *SHOT*

:iconromanoplz: YOU'RE THE DAMN AUTHOR!! YOU-A KNOW WHAT'S-A GONNA HAPPEN, DAMN RAGAZZA!!

SHUDDUP!!! YOU'RE NOT EVEN IN THIS FIC!!!

:iconromanoplz: DAMN YOU!!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
XD Ah, ah, ah, Lovi, watch your langage. Or do I have to punish you? ;)
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconsitalywtfplz: The hell you're-a gonna punish me!

:iconjosie1130: I think she's serious, Lovi.

:iconromanotwitchplz: Ahaaa...haaa....

:iconsadromanochibiplz: RUN AWAY!!! AND I TOLD YOU NOT TO CALL ME THAT!!!!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
:) good, lovi. :) I'm so glad we came to an agreement. :iconrussiaauraplz:
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:iconjosie1130:
josie1130 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
((omg that's freakin scary, dude!! XD))
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
:iconcreepysmileplz: (IKR?)
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:iconkodokuna-kun:
Kodokuna-Kun Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't find the first two chapters T^T
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:iconjosie1130:
josie1130 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok check the description now they should be there~
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:iconkodokuna-kun:
Kodokuna-Kun Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*huggles* YAY! Danke!
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:iconjosie1130:
josie1130 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gern geschehen~
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:iconjosie1130:
josie1130 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*le gasp* gah!! i knew i forgot to put something in the description!!!

hang on.
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Kodokuna-Kun Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yayy ^x^ Haha.
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Yuuki226 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I demand :iconmoarplz:
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:iconjosie1130:
josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
and moar you shall have!

as soon as the plot bunnies grace me with their presence
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Yuuki226 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD I'm seriously looking forward to it, I'm excited to see how this series goes~
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeay~
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yukiVSkyo Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this!
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TheUnknownlover Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
OMG!~ cant wait for the next !~~~~~ :iconomgsocuteplz:
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lolz
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Evilbutterfly8 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
For some reason I imagine Lilith looking like the maid from Black Butler XD, but if she were like her at all she would've gotten a nosebleed from Luddy ripping the dress LOL!!!!!! :lmao:
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOLOLOL XD well my mental image of her doesnt have glasses, and she has this short-ish curly blonde hair....but whatever you want her to look like is fine! I think that'd be hilarious if she looked like the maid from black butler
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing once more! You officially got yourself a fangirl!
I like this ending better I think altough the previous ending is something I'd do :P
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YEAY~ I HAVE A FAN GIRL!!!!! I can finally have an excuse to get a security system installed at my house!! :D

Lolz i would done the previous ending as well~
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha yeah you better instal that XD :iconscaryrussiaplz: I will find my way in anyway nah just joking :P btw do you have Skype? I'd be fun to Skype with you ^^
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nuh!!! DX i dun have a webcam *FAIL*
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha you can also just type or have voice chats ^^ I didn't know that first either *shot*
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh DUDE sweetness *america LOL moment XD*

maybe i'll make one then!
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconprussiawinplz: Awesome!
My Skype name is Katya,North
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Ririsu-san Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Reader went a bit out of control. Poor lilith didn't deserve this much... but it is still her fault. She shouldn't have tied the corset so tight. And it really isn't her day. I just hope Gilbert won't make it any worse for her. I think that is going to be a relationship but for how long? I hope it's going to be alright.

I will read the next chapter soon, right? Please.
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah so I changed the ending since I agree that the reader went a bit out of control. Read the new ending and tell me what you think~
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lolz reader is so embarrassed right now so that's why she acted that way.

And I think im gonna make a relationship there, but im not totally set on that just yet. They might just be good friends.

and yes the new chapter is coming out soon~
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Ririsu-san Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconririsu-san:
Ririsu-san Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Thank you for informing me. I do like this end better because it is more in caracter of the reader. I will look forward to the next part with all my heart. I acually that we can have more contact in some way.
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Lillith~ I feel somewhat bad for her altough it IS her fault *mutters* damn corsets....
I hope there will be more soon! I am simply enchanted by you'r style of writing and I love how detailed it is! The characters are also spot-on!
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah so I changed the ending since I felt that the reader went a bit out of control. Read the new ending and tell me what you think~
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YUSH!!! I DID SPOT ON CHARACTERS!!!! :iconfuckyeahamericaplz:

And I'm so glad you like it~

lolz Lilith will be fine, you get over it pretty easily XD
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconprussiawinplz:

The fact that her name is Lilith is so funny for me because I have a friend who'se nickname is Ririsu wich is Lilith translated to Japanese~
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NO FREAKIN WAY!!!!!!! *tis awesome*
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KatyaTheButler Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yeah she's on DA too her name is Ririsu-san She writes real awesome~
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D yeaaaay~
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roailia Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i can't see it -3-
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
[link]

here's the link to the fanfiction version so you can read it~
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roailia Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!!!! :squee:
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HUZZAH!
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!!!!!!

i have it on fanfiction let me get teh link
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roailia Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!!!! Your a life savor!!!!
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